Teeth
One day me and my friend went fishing in a river it was so boring my teeth fall at and my friend laugh and laugh and laugh and I went to go and grab them bat my teeth went over bode and my friend laugh and laugh.
Next my friend was still laughing a little bit. And my friend got a fish and he being into me and it was so so annoying my friend bot his teeth in the fish my friend showed me and I graber the teeth and I bot the teeth in my math and it was so yake and I didn't like it so I bot my friend teeth in the water and my friend was so so so sad.
The End
Hi I'm Tahnellah I'm a student at KawaKawa Primary School,I like your story Emily but maybe you could work on your spelling because I found a few mistakes but other than that your story is good you just need to work on your spelling and read over it again so it makes sense.Maybe when you are commenting or if you have free time you could check out my class blog and go and check out my blog
ReplyDeletethis is my class blog http://kpsjbaker.blogspot.co.nz/ and this is my blog http://kpstahnellahs.blogspot.co.nz/ enjoy and have fun byeee.